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Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! I love:

• the bullet point list (so funny)

• “my cheeks feel like someone is holding a lighter to them.”

• STILL LIFE OF GUINEA PIGS, PLEASE

• the ending!!!!! Not what I expected & I love being surprised

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Thank you for the close read!!!! 🩷

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“My instinct to go for the joke is stronger than everything else, especially when it’s the wrong time.” - mmmmyeah very this!!

This was so much fun to read. I loved the accompanying audio too. I could read a whole book on Jordan if you’re writing it. You’ve given him a distinct and defined voice, and I feel like I know him after this story. I found him relatable and the growing pains he’s experiencing with his friend also very relatable. And Gill?? Heeeeey…

Love reading your writing. This does feel different in comparison to other things I’ve read from you, but it is still so distinctly you. Bravo!!!

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Thank you!!!! 🩷

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Feb 16Edited

Please tell me we are getting your novel soon cause I already know you’re gonna be my new favorite author and I can’t wait to make everyone I know read it.

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🥹🥹 that’s so sweet, thank you!!!!!!

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gosh this is so cute and so hopeful!! that chest tightness we all come to accept thing, feels too real! my heart just did that little thing while reading it.

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🥹🥹🥹 thank you for your close read!!! 🩷

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more audio readings plz!!!! glam author at sold out bookstore event tease!!!!

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VERY THAT!!!

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IM A CAPRICORN IN FIGHT OR FLIGHT

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ok this was so fun t0 listen to in ur voice !!!! <3

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Thank you!!!!!!

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